I wanna fly.
I wanna fly with the birds.
I wanna fly over the cityes.
I wanna fly over the hills, the mountains and the rivers.
I wanna fly to another place where I can make wath I want.
Where I can feel wath I want.
I wanna fly to that place, open my closed wings and fly.
Fly...
Fly...
Fly...
Fly...
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EXCELLENT ELOI...REALLY TRUELY EXCELLENT...IT'S A BEAUTIFUL POEM...I LIKE THE FEELING AND THE RITHYM ...IT FEELS LIKE FLYING AND IT FEELS FREE.
CONGRADULATIONS !! WRITE MORE...I WOULD LOVE TO SEE MORE POEMS HERE!!
a few tiny corrections: English-on-Wheels-Corrections
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