Friday, January 25, 2008
DESCRIBE SOMETHING THAT HAPPENED WHILE RIDING A BIKE
When I was eight years I went to italy with my fathers and a friends. One day we are in a camping and my friend Adrià and me are going with bike. There is bombcar and my friend go so faster and he jumped and he fell on a nail and stuck in his head. He can continue the holiday, but when he returns to his home, he has need an operation to take out the nail of his head.
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eloi...real good except ...you started in the past and then used some verbs in the present...edit your post and change these and end "he needed an operation to take the nail out of his head" ..also did you just go with your "fathers" or did your mothers come too? (in which case it would be "parents"
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